Rewrite the paragraph on page 23 in first person singular (I). The result will be the most informal voice in writing. The writing will have a more personal and casual tone, such as a diary or a memoir, similar to that of Desiderata.
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Personal Pronouns: Personal Pronouns refer to (1) the person speaking, (2) the person spoken to, (3) the person, place, thing, idea spoken about.
1st Person I, me, my mine we, us, our, ours
2nd Person you, your, yours you, your, yours
3rd Person he, him, his they them
she, her, hers their, theirs,