Write the first draft of an article for Great Moments in Sports magazine. Begin with a topic sentence that grabs your audience's attention. Include a brief summary of the action up to the moment that you are describing. Then, use the details from your free writing to build your narrative to a dramatic climax. You should conclude your description with an explanation of the outcome of the event.
Revising-- Make sure that you have included all the important details concerning the sporting event. Is your description vivid? Have you used actions verbs to make the description lively? Will your audience be compelled to read the entire passage? Proofread your description and prepare a final draft.
Revising-- Make sure that you have included all the important details concerning the sporting event. Is your description vivid? Have you used actions verbs to make the description lively? Will your audience be compelled to read the entire passage? Proofread your description and prepare a final draft.